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College Composition / Unit 3   CMP 0058 worked example, 60 to 90 seconds

Five Ways to Fix a Splice or Run-On

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The idea

Comma splices and run-ons are fixed the same five ways.

In practice

Take "The protection came late the birds had already left." First, add a comma and a coordinating conjunction: "The protection came late, and the birds had already left." Second, use a period to make two sentences. Third, use a semicolon when the ideas are closely related: "The protection came late; the birds had already left." Fourth, use a semicolon with a transitional word: "The protection came late; as a result, the birds had already left." Fifth, turn one clause into a dependent clause: "Because the protection came late, the birds had already left." Each fix is grammatical, but each says something slightly different about how the ideas connect.

Where people slip

A comma plus however is not one of the fixes; however is a transitional word, not a conjunction, so it needs a semicolon or a period before it.

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