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College Composition / Unit 19   CMP 0457 short lesson, about 20 seconds

Beyond Restatement

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The idea

A conclusion may restate the thesis, in new words, but restating alone is not enough.

In practice

After restating, a conclusion shows why the judgment is reasonable and why the topic matters, perhaps how lives would change if readers accepted it.

Where people slip

Copying the introduction's sentences into the conclusion makes the paper feel circular.

Your place on the trail

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