American Literature / Unit 10 AML 0925 worked example, 60 to 90 seconds
Reading a Dickinson Poem in Four Moves
The idea
Dickinson's compression rewards a fixed procedure. Move one: find the situation, which is usually a single concrete scene stated in the first two lines, a carriage, a deathbed, a door, a gun. Move two: identify the abstraction the scene stands for, since she almost always pairs one concrete image with one large idea, and the poem's work is the pairing. Move three: locate the turn, which in her poems is often the final stanza and often reverses what the earlier stanzas implied, so a poem that has been calm becomes frightening or a poem about defeat becomes about knowledge. Move four: check the rhyme at the end, because a poem that closes on a slant rhyme is refusing the resolution its grammar seems to offer, and the exam's questions about tone are usually decided there.
In practice
Scene, abstraction, turn, and the closing rhyme.
Where people slip
Do not paraphrase the abstraction back into the scene. A carriage ride is not a statement about carriages, and an answer that stays literal will miss every question she is set for.
Your place on the trail
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