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American Literature / Unit 7   AML 0623 worked example, 60 to 90 seconds

Telling Emerson From Thoreau on the Page

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The idea

Exam passages from the two are easy to confuse and easy to separate with three tests. First, the level of abstraction: Emerson argues in general propositions about the soul, society and the scholar, while Thoreau argues from a specific and usually physical instance, a bean-row, a cost in dollars, a night in a cell. Second, the sentence: Emerson's are declarative and aphoristic and can be lifted out whole, while Thoreau's are longer, drier and full of pun and understatement. Third, the subject of complaint: Emerson complains that people borrow their opinions, while Thoreau complains that people waste their lives buying things. Both preach self-reliance; only one keeps accounts.

In practice

Abstraction against instance, aphorism against account.

Where people slip

Both men write first-person prose full of natural imagery, so the pronoun and the trees decide nothing. The test is whether the passage reasons from a principle or from a measurement.

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